Thread:True infinity35/@comment-5903643-20180731130230/@comment-5903643-20180826234200

True infinity35 wrote: Okay. I have a friend of mine to help me point out the grammar mistakes I might have missed. So I will continue to work on it.

Aside from the grammar. What do you think of the actual characters? Do you have a favorite character in the story? If so, who is it and why? The major characters have some effort in them, but I have to wonder if some, such as Claire, really need a backstory. I don't have a favorite character.

Oh, and I created a Roblox group where we roleplay as the Jackal Squad, with heavy inspiration from your fanfic. You should create a Roblox account and join us.