User blog comment:Katrins/Emerald Snatcher Part 4/@comment-167456-20110305140456

There's a problem with the order of Sonic's word bubbles in the last panel - they should be the other way around. Again, remember to position word bubbles as they are being read: left to right and top to bottom.

There are also a couple of typos. In panel two, the word should be spelled "destroyed", and in panel three, the word "Island" is missing the 's'. Everyone makes typos from time to time, so it's important to read through what you've written before posting.