User blog comment:Cloudthehedgehog12/Dinner Arguement/@comment-1536043-20100728191032

Hey Cloud, I read that argument on another of your comics and i would like to give you some suggestions for your comics (you may say I have no experience since I haven't done any sonic comics): 1. You shouldn't put the names of the characters, probably everyone who reads this knows who sonic and the others are, if they're fan made, write that one's name somewhere else; 2. Think why you are doing this. Are you going to make a series out of this? Is it just a comic that's supposed to be fun? 3. Do some more jokes. Or better ones. 4. If you want to keep doing comics, then hear what others have to say about your comics and accept it, that wil make you better at making these. 5. Don't give up, and try your best. 6. Pizza ;)