Thread:Ultrasonic9000/@comment-1392727-20150202105839

You seem to frequently write parts of the Sonic Boom episodes in this manner (for example) -

Eggman reveals that this was a part of his master plan: by using the threat of Cowbot, he tricked Sonic and Tails into upgrading his security system with their tech which he could now use against them.

I have not seen this kind of format, not just on Wikipedia, but any encyclopedia (books, I mean). It looks a bit odd to me, especially when written twice on an article. It sounds redundant.

I rewrote it into -

Eggman reveals that he tricked Sonic and Tails into upgrading his security system with their tech which he could now use against them.

I think it's more comfortable to read.

This may sound a little nit-picky and subjective but, I would say I am 'sensitive' to sentence structure. Just thought I'd give you my opinion. 