User:Sonicadventure



"We will not stand idle by and wait for the day that we defend our freedom and land from the corrupt society that is the Guardian Units Of Empire, that day is here..." - Thorunchav Kimball, "The Torque"

To the admins of Sonic News Network administration, I, SonicAdventure (or alternate identity, Oo_RaVeNgAd3_ChR0niK_oO or ChaosTheosis222555) have returned.

The fanfiction that I am working on now is "Sonic the Hedgehog: The Final Draft", as written below. I have to warn you though, the first season has only 10 episodes (eight of which are cut up into 4 sections, as episode 7 consists of 2 entirely different episodes), all of them entirely graphic and aimed at the mature audiences. is a character-based fan fiction.

The series is rated TV-MA for mature audiences, however it would be toned down throughout the second season, which goes back to the basics of the series storyline plot (much to SEGA's incompetence at the time), as well as real life issues. The first season centers on the true darkness of the Sonic series.

This is one of the first series to have Queen Aleena as one of the main characters, second to Sonic: War for Mobius. The most notable characters in the series are in organizations or squads of 50 characters apiece.

Concept
The story was supposed to take place in Station Square; but because of Sonic’s exile from Station Square, that is no longer the case. The setting would permanently transition to Corner Central County.

Sonic's first battles start with ventures including defeating various lifeforms such as Katamari, former villain Bobby Blabby, owner of a corrupt tabloid empire with the main headquarters located in outer space (next door towards the Space Colony ARK). Later on in Season 1, he settles into the city slums after being banished from Station Square, much to the horror of Queen Aleena.

Sonic would also be overcoming obstacles including vengeful criminals like Thorun Kimball, a former terrorist, murderer and con man with a low IQ of 11.5. Fed up with the life of crime and villainy after his release from prison, Kimball accepts responsibility for his wrongdoings and this caused him and Sonic to bury the hatchet shortly thereafter. His group, the Chess Disciples are also known for their armory (their arsenal is self-made, however it resembles UNSC weaponry).

Amidst all the terror, the evil genius Doctor Eggman celebrates by throwing a cutthroat matchmaking tournament, dubbed as "World Trade" that includes an array of sports (thrash ball, hockey, shooting arenas, street racing, duel monsters, extreme sports, etc).

The first half of season (“Another Public Service Announcement “- “Power To The Petronas”) one was an adaption of the ten Sonic games listed above (namely Sonic Adventure 2, as well as a few sprite comics and YouTube videos related to Sonic and all things gaming, as it revolved around all 25 of the Sonic franchise's eponymous characters (Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Shadow, etc.) and their personal demons, as well as formulating a plan to put an end to Eggman's tournament.

Favorite Sonic Games

 * 1) Sonic The Hedgehog III &amp; Knuckles
 * 2) Sonic Advance 3
 * 3) Sonic Generations
 * 4) Sonic Rivals 2
 * 5) Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood
 * 6) Sonic Battle
 * 7) Sonic Adventure 2
 * 8) Sonic Heroes
 * 9) Sonic Adventure
 * 10) Sonic Riders

Characters
The Sonic Federation consists of 100 characters. However, the organization is divided into groups of 50. The parties in question are known as the Mobian Conference (Sonic Warriors, Leisure Suit GamerZ) and the Darkness Conference (Chess Disciples Ordnance Mafia, Theosis Express), respectively.

Sonic Warriors/Leisure Suit GamerZ

 * Sonic the Hedgehog
 * Kaiser Webb
 * Knuckles the Echidna
 * Miles “Tails” Prower
 * Cream the Rabbit
 * Marine the Raccoon
 * Jake King
 * Storm the Albatross
 * Charmy Bee
 * Maria Robotnik
 * Kaikaina Hare
 * Alyssa the Rabbit
 * Jimmy the Hedgehog
 * Dennis Odami
 * Arnold the Polar Bear
 * Vector the Crocodile
 * Shadow the Hedgehog
 * Jet the Hawk
 * Angelus the Gatekeeper
 * Silver the Hedgehog
 * Armee the Hybrid
 * Azap/Agent Orange
 * Becky the Echidna
 * Frost the Polar Bear
 * Chaos Zero
 * Guardian Earth of the Fortress
 * Jared the Bear
 * Princess Tikal
 * Niall The Hedgehog
 * Princess Sally
 * Blaze the Cat
 * Mephiles the Dark
 * Big the Cat
 * Queen Aleena
 * Wave the Swallow
 * E-123 Omega
 * Bark The Polar Bear
 * Mercede the Wolf
 * Draw Odami
 * Travis the Bear
 * Espio the Chameleon
 * Metal Sonic
 * Julie-Su
 * Amy Rose
 * E-102 Gamma
 * Donna Roba
 * Dash Odami
 * Ray The Squirrel
 * Chip the Dog
 * Kimberly, Angel of the Darkness

The Designated Chessmasters Organization
'The Designated Chessmasters Organization (also known as The Designated Chessmasters or simply the Chess Disciples) is a unit founded by Thorunchav Jaquaan Kimball (now going under the alias, Tropical Depression Kimball, or Hurricane Thorunchav, as he wanted his name placed on the list for the 1997 Atlantic Hurricane Season during his tenure as an antagonist), during his stay in the Security Housing Unit Program (SHU Program) in the Altharcatraz Dungeon, a supermax prison located next to the equally infamous Prison Island of Station Square. Their roles in the Sonic Federation as well as the Sonic the Hedgehog universe in general are primarily as enforcers rather than strategists, compared to the Sonic Warriors.

A Look into The Ringleader
At a first glance impression, the young Thorunchav Jaquaan Kimball was content with aiding mad scientist Dr. Eggman on his schemes of contemplating Sonic's capture in order to build the Eggman Empire for a chance at world domination. His appearance did not look menacing in the slightest. He was a brown, anthropomorphic wolf with brown pigmented fur and orange eyes. His attire consisted of a purple hooded coat and a red cape, red and blue shoes; his pants are layered with black, brown, maroon, magenta at the bottom, as well as red orange, orange, yellow orange and golden yellow at the top (this is the color scheme of the Chess Disciples); a pair of yellow sunglasses. and a black & red double belt strap with a skull buckle on the bottom. Over his bandana, the henchman also wore a red cap with the gothic style C on it; His place of residence was a money safe attached to race track custom forge, which would later become his base of operations as an adult. He would occasionally wear a suit and tie when he owned L. Ron Kimbul Investments, a phony advisory firm in Corner Central Village, United Federation.

Thorun Kimbul's sordid and turbulent childhood consisted of numerous punishments and governmental circumstances that forced his mother (Marisol Kimball) to kick him out of the apartment into the real world at the age of 4. The young Thorun forced himself to know when to go to school on time. He knew very little about the real world or his studies, and focused too much on video games, constructing doomsday devices, cooking up illegal narcotics and hazardous materials to sell (he stated before that he worked with hazardous materials at the age of 7), as well as constructing his own armory (i.e. make his own guns) in his basement to gain world domination when he was supposed to accomplish the work provided for him. After many major incidents (and straight failing grades), he was subject to referrals and was forced to repeat the ninth grade, only to be expelled shortly afterward. Lacking a desire for leaving anything to chance, he pursued to seek revenge on the school that expelled him throughout the usage of his Nuclear Rocket Launcher. However, he had to find a way to pay fines for the wreckage or face execution, so he decided to get an application for four jobs at once; Unfortunately for him, he would later be rejected from each one of them because of his infamous reputation as a murderous confidence artist.

Thorun was slated to have had an extremely childlike impression of his surroundings and started to think that society was conspiring to deprive him of life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness, despite his fabrication of what very little intelligence he had; however it was shown that this was based off of him nearly choking a doctor to death after realizing that his mother's accident left her in a vegetative state. Because of this, he started to show no sign of mercy for the weak, and was addicted to the thrill of pouring salt into the wound. He was also deemed to be very stupid granted the way he carried out his assaults and his aforementioned lackluster grammar. He was a very skilled architect and a well trained mechanic as far warfare was concerned, much to the courtesy of Eggman. His specialties consisted of constructing doomsday devices, headquarters complexes and firing laser cannon for the purposes of wreaking havoc upon the world, or perhaps as a method of revenge, or murderous intentions.

TK was also known for his successful maintenance of his womanizing ability and career. As Eggman moved on to find another method to his plan, and TK sought interest in jewel thief, treasure hunter, Rouge the Bat. After hours of incessant courting, the white bat would eventually fall for him despite being informed otherwise by Shadow, E-123 Omega, Metal Sonic, Amy Rose and Knuckles, who are all sensing a grave disturbance in the force, by demonstrating signals of complete suspicion of Thoron's motivations. By the time of Rouge's arrival at Thorun Kimball's airborne custom racetrack forge, Izzy nearly blows their cover at the store by informing her that this was TK's bomb factory. Towards the end of The Thorun Kimball Saga and the beginning of Channeling the Online Battleground, his personality and outlook on life has since changed.

Formation of The Designated Chessmasters of the Underground and Kimbul Investments
After his return to prison, TK complains about the lack of air conditioning and food. Other jailbirds in a neighboring cell agree with him and carry out their escape attempt. After that successful escape attempt, one of the prison escape artists lends a hand to help break TK out of his cell, turned out to be a very close confidant of TK, who gives him countless ideas for schemes. TK then forms a gang called The Designated Chessmasters (b.k.a. The Chess Disciples), who consist of himself as the gang's ringleader, fellow criminal enforcers Israel "Izzy" Evans, Hazel the Chameleon, Colleen Glouchester, Adam McIntyre, Alfred R. Yuuk, Donald Fane, Walter Tuttles III and Raymond Cannon Jr. After quite some confusion of TK's mug shot with a famous painting, the escaped convicts find land to construct their own a base of operations: an overgrown money vault with a built-in lookout window that looked similar to a fast-food drive thru; however on the exterior is a platform; as the vault was attached to a custom forge which resembled a race track.

Color Scheme

 * 1) Black
 * 2) Brown
 * 3) Maroon
 * 4) Fuchsia
 * 5) Blood Red
 * 6) Red Orange
 * 7) Orange
 * 8) Yellow Orange
 * 9) Peach
 * 10) Golden Yellow

Weapons, Items & Vehicles
The weaponry is similar to that of the UNSC weaponry from the Halo franchise.

Weapons

 * Assault Rifle
 * Magnum
 * Battle Rifle
 * Designated Marksman Rifle
 * Pump-Action Shotgun
 * Sniper Rifle
 * Rocket Launcher
 * Grenade Launcher
 * Vehicular Battle Gun
 * Flamethrower
 * Carbine Cannon
 * Thompson Submachinegun

Explosives/Abilities

 * Fusion Coil
 * Landmine
 * Frag Grenade
 * Firebomb
 * Jet Pack
 * Active Camo
 * Fuel Canister
 * Propane Tank
 * Armor Lock
 * Regeneration Shield

Vehicles

 * All Terrain Vehicle
 * Theosis Express
 * Golden Warthog Jeep
 * Scorpion Tank
 * Semi Truck
 * Drop Ship
 * Tricked-Out Avalanche SUV

Roster

 * Thorunchav Kimball
 * Bobby Blabby
 * T.L.J . Sponge
 * Ronald Fane
 * Alfred R. Yuuk/David Zuul
 * Walt Tuttles Jr.
 * Adam McIntyre
 * Renegade Vasquez
 * James MacDonnell
 * Israel “Izzy” Evans
 * Grif Lord
 * Clyde the Hybrid
 * Red The Bat
 * Huri the Hedgehog
 * Fiona Fox
 * Exordia The Forbidden Swordmaster
 * Peterson Noah Waynesworth
 * Doom The Dog
 * Clay The Echidna
 * Kevin The Coyote
 * Derrick The Rabbit
 * Smoke The Hare
 * Kip Snip
 * Walker Black III
 * Beulah The Fox
 * Cherry Polmagrate
 * Hannah the Dog
 * Kylie The Cat
 * Rouge The Bat
 * Lili Erisol
 * Casey Carter
 * Crystalline the Martin
 * Lacious Launders
 * Evelyn Cindertosh
 * Colleen Glouchester
 * Diabla Bloodspawn
 * Chocolate the Hawk
 * Dr. Bander
 * Duncan the Squirrel
 * Archduke Bellum
 * Coffee the Echidna
 * Diane Fahrenheit
 * Emerl/Gizoid
 * Tails Doll
 * Nova the Hybrid
 * DJ Goldenrod
 * Steve Eschol
 * Dezmond Cannon
 * Hazel the Chameleon

Guardian Units Of the Black Empire

 * Dr. Eggman
 * Bokkun
 * Guardian Units of Nations
 * Black Arms

Pizmatik Ordnance (inactive; fragmented)
Pismatic Ordnance Disposal (better known as Pizmatik Gang; abbreviated as The P.O.D.) was a rogue super-division consisting of 10 of the United Federation's most sinister and elite criminals, as well as being Dr. Eggman's strongest hitmen. Their goal was to bring about the death of Sonic the Hedgehog and his friends, as well as the destruction of Mobius itself after the resurrection of Metal Sonic: Two Point Zero.

The 10 most notable staff are Blood Mistress Debiasi, the only female of the group, as well as the one pulling the strings throughout the entire season; Overlord Pismo, the co-conspirator and group leader; Bruce Hedgehog, the abusive biological father of Sonic and ex-husband of Queen Aleena; Dark Sergeant Archcruz Napoleon, rabid cop of diabolical and Machiavellian proportions, who is also dubbed as the more mentally depraved individual of the group due to his evilness and his addiction to PCP. Other villainous individuals include Whrauman S. Bloodspawn, Lucas Strong, The Juggernaut, Scratch the Versatile, Grounder the Ferocious, and Sleet (his first appearance in a series since Sonic Underground).

The unit was fragmented after all 10 members of the group were defeated; 8 of which were the combined efforts of the world renowned hero Sonic the Hedgehog. Although the first four wound up facing various predicaments post-defeat after their breakdown: Sonic and Dennis walked away with Napoleon's payment to Thorun Kimball and his gang, which lead to his assassination; Grounder is being incarcerated in Prison Island's Solitary Housing Unit after his friends and family were fed up with his abusive behavior and his crimes against humanity (he took on an a more evil and abusive personality after joining the group); Lucas is currently grounded for a whole year as he is in the basement after a punishment beating from his mother, who learned about her son's expulsion from school but having yet she does not acknowledge his participation in Eggman's villainous and criminal enterprise (his belongings remain in his room; yet his Xbox 360 was confiscated by federal officials); Whrauman was hospitalized after his defeat.

Notable Members

 * Archcrux Napoleon (deceased)
 * Bloodmistress Debiasi
 * Bruce Hedgehog
 * Scratch
 * Grounder (incarcerated)
 * Overlord Pizmo
 * Lucas Strong (grounded)
 * Whrauman S. Bloodspawn (hospitalized; also incarcerated)
 * Sleet the Ferocious

Weapons In Use

 * Spartan Laser
 * Assault Rifle
 * Flamethrower

Season 1: Sonic Aftermathers Presents...
Episode: 1 - 5, 5 - 8, 9 -10
 * 01. Another Public Service Announcement
 * 02. Journey To The Internets
 * 03. We're The Desperate Measures
 * 04. Power To The Profits
 * 05. 2 Diabolical, 2 Murderous
 * 06. Channeling The Worldwide Battleground
 * 07. Tournament Takedown/The Torque
 * 08. Femme Fatale: Fate Of the Bloodmistress
 * 09. Ceremonial Armageddon
 * 10. Looking Back and Moving Ahead

Season 2: Back To Basics: The Empire City Chronicles (11-48)
Episode Number: 11 - 48
 * 11. Back To Angel Island
 * 12. Sonic's Angels
 * 13. A Chao's Play
 * 14. Return to Corner Central
 * 15. The Big Takeoff
 * 16. The Rebuilding Of The Tornado IV
 * 17. All Speeders Day
 * 18. Tournamental Tornadoes
 * 19. Blast From The Past
 * 20. Wedding Bell Chaos
 * 21. Thunder Vault: Energy Drink
 * 22. Duel Of The Century
 * 23. A Leisure Suit Memorial
 * 24. Face Off: The Astonishing Result
 * 25. Tragic Animal Deaths
 * 26. Heroes Of The Corn
 * 27. Emerald Dropout
 * 28. Sonic Revenge
 * 29. Finding Your Way Out
 * 30. Maria’s Memorial
 * 31. Disadvantaged Training
 * 32. An Epic Alternative
 * 33. Gods Of Angel Island
 * 34. Return Of The Chaos Puzzle
 * 35. The Villainous Digest
 * 36. Zero Gravity 2
 * 37. Revenge At Its Best
 * 38. Showdown In The Sky
 * 39. Unblock Solution II: Full Throttle
 * 40. The Rest Isn't History
 * 41. Rifle Academy
 * 42. Saviors II and The Rescue
 * 43. A Hedgehog's Problems
 * 44. Differences Between Like and Love
 * 45. Face Off
 * 46. Tails' Triumph
 * 47. Wall-2-Wall Combat
 * 48. A New Battle: End Of A Sequel

Season 3: The Ultimate Reunion (49-96)
Episode Number: 49 - 96
 * 49. A Whole New Evil
 * 50. Slam Goody Focus Grill
 * 51. Sonic's Long Journey
 * 52. The History Of Sonic Team
 * 53. A New Sequel Begins: With The
 * 54. Rouge's Former Home World
 * 55. Attack Of The 1X Robots
 * 56. A Bill To Remember
 * 57. The Alien Cooking Show
 * 58. Takedown Tally
 * 59. Ultimate Cosmetics
 * 60. Hurricane Hellfire
 * 61. Threw It All Away
 * 62. Cnidarians’ Contest
 * 63. Infernal Sparkfire
 * 64. Luxurious Reign Of Terror
 * 65. A Peoples Person
 * 66. Two Heroes And A Baby
 * 67. Treason Time
 * 68. Lifestyles Of The Obsoletely Fabulous
 * 69. The Hedgehog Hunt Begins
 * 70. An Epic Fail Discovery
 * 71. A Fiend In Need
 * 72. The Battle Against The Clones
 * 73. H2Whoa!: The Belgrade
 * 74. H2Whoa!: Anti-Carbohydrates
 * 75. Desprately Sneaking Sonic
 * 76. Murderous Gumshoes
 * 77. Al-Yuuk's Revenge
 * 78. Trail Of Tails
 * 79. Teenage Mutant Hedgehog
 * 80. The Recording Contract
 * 81. A Solo Record
 * 82. Duchess Trilogies
 * 83. The Dark Spirit Revealed
 * 84. Knuckles Smashes The Darkness
 * 85. Return Of The Heroes Treasure
 * 86. Gourmet Hamburger Violation
 * 87. Return Of The Pit Of Darkness
 * 88. House Pet Hell
 * 89. A Videogame Of Leagues
 * 90. Professional Dueling
 * 91. The Grim Cheaper
 * 92. No Rouge Left Behind
 * 93. Final Nightmare
 * 94. Armageddon: Final Showdown
 * 95. Al-Yuuk’s Final Words
 * 96. A Completely Catastrophic Farewell

Fanpages
Note: All of these were deleted. Oh well, that's what happens after a 6 month absence.

Past Work

 * The Avian Rogues
 * Sonic Adventure 2 Riders
 * Terminix
 * Red the Bat
 * Jazz The Hedgehog
 * Sonic Adventure 2007 Movie: Sonic's Big Score!
 * Aeon The Hedgehog
 * Sonic Riders Episodes
 * Prototype the Hedghehog
 * Bobby Blabby
 * User:Sonicadventure/Oslo Robotnik
 * User:Sonicadventure/Armake The Hybrid

Recent Works

 * The Thoron Kimball Saga