Forum:Feedback?

Hey, you may not remember me or know me, but hi my name is Dawn. Pleased to meet you :)

Ok so I created a fanfic--NO IT'S NOT SOME SAPPY ONE. I just want more creative critism from people whom I know that will know just what the heck they are saying.

It's called, ''Inverting Mistakes. By 07XReflectional.''

Summary: A strange unidentified object roams through space, eating planets as a whole. Why? Who knows? Back on earth, GUN sends out invitations to Sonic & co inviting them to the ARK Reopening Ceremony. Strange? Yeah. . .you can say that. Not only that but Shadow crashes the party and attempts to kill the President. Why wasn'the invited to it? We find ourselves in Flowery Fields, and one moment to the next, Cream the Rabbit gets kidnapped. Are these events interlaced? If so, why? Read to find out ;)

I'd appreciate if you would do me this favor :} I really do. There are no ranndom fan characters in there that I threw in to have a relationship with the main cast. There will be about four OCs that are thrown in there to get the plot going however. Anyhow, thanks for reading! :D

Dawnthehedgehog 05:43, May 1, 2012 (UTC)