Thread:Bluestreak425/@comment-32769624-20190510143246/@comment-36654742-20190516223630

Thirdly: “your pedal to the medal - four” and “a led of pushin’ - five” (we’re almost done. don’t worry). Both of these lines just don’t make any sense. I can see why you’d think (9) works, because blah blah blah “pedal to the medal”, blah blah blah racing car language. But Johnny is clearly singing 5 syllables in the line, where your line has a whopping 8 syllables in it! And as for “a led of pushin’ - five”, do you even grammar, bro? Aside from that, the two lines I put for the verse just make more sense because 1, they sound more grammarly and contextually logical, and 2, it makes more sense to put “fight” a couple lines before a rhyming term: “ignite”. It’s a sort of Dr. Seuss esque technique that’s used in a lot of songs to help it flow.