Board Thread:Sonic Boom/@comment-679780-20161030044629/@comment-11584028-20161031112311

Mystic Monkey wrote:

Erik.wallace.395 wrote:

Mystic Monkey wrote: I'm not saying it's rushed, just need to pace itself better.

Hm, maybe I'm just bullpoopin', I was gonna bring up an Adventure Time episode as an example of pacing, but even the dialogue in Adventure Time is paced to fit it's timeslot. However it's done in a way that makes it all the more relevent of the story and doesn't at all feel like they're trying to fit everything in in time.

I see what you mean by that. I actually remembered that chapters 1-19 of "Sonic Boom Bloopers" were a bit paced. It's a good thing I slowed down for those chapters now. Yeah, most episodes of Sonic Boom feel like the producers are trying to fit the whole story in the 11 minute margin. It doesn't feel rushed, just fast paced with dialogue delivered abruptly than convincingly and moments in the episodes stories that could of been revised better, like why Sonic quickly regretted Tommy following him around not long after permitting him.

An episode of Adventure Time usually have roughly as much dialogue as a episode of Sonic Boom but it's story is paced so that instead of a full story having to fit into an 11 minute mark, it is a reasonable size story that can cover the 11 minute mark and have it's dialogue delivered more convincingly.

Seriously? I was literally comparing this to my Sonic Boom fanfic. But, I still see what you mean.