User blog comment:Cloudthehedgehog12/Stairoids/@comment-167456-20100924195111

It's not bad, but I've got a couple of pointers: most importantly, the speech balloons in panels 3 and 4 are positioned in a way that makes it difficult to read the dialogue in order. If you can't put them from left to right, then the first speech bubble should go higher than the second.

Also, there are some spelling and grammatical errors. "Your back" should be "You're back"; "Thats" should be "That's"; "Whats" should be "What's"; and "stairoids" should be "steroids".