Thread:Ultrasonic9000/@comment-26167440-20160406225217

So I was wondering and this might be a stupid question, but could you give me some advice to improve my information. I've heard it was redundant and it still sounds great. But I don't know what's wrong with it. I thought you could give me some tips, it's just pretty hard to edit and some of my work is incomplete or just imperfect. 