User blog comment:MetalShadow272/Lightning the Hedgehog (Future) Part 3 of 5/@comment-3970120-20110721054832

I've read the first two parts, and I gotta say, I was quick to judge. I thought just because you recolored pictures that it would suck, but it's pretty slapping interesting. Breakdown: One thing that surprised me is that the story dosen't feature sonic and friends that much. Which is cool, because I would like to see them eventually worked out of the story completly, and (maybe) become it's own self-contained universe, so to speak. And while I still think Lightning is a bit......you know, I'm really digging this Claws character. Also, I don't think your drawings suck, there just a little spastic, and there honestly alot more dynamic than other pictures I've seen.

Now for the stuff i don't like. I don't know if this was rushed to write or what, but the spelling mistakes and incorrect grammer (especially when you have characters talk) is really bugging me. And while I haven't seen this Maim character in action much, the idea of a back pack that can carry a bunch of stuff AND be functioning jetpack is a teeeny bit accesive.

That's my review so far, I hope it helps more so than the last time I tried to give constructive critisism.