Thread:DanikV/@comment-4220590-20170320183621

Have you tried looking up the written recaps in Shadow the Hedgehog? If you do, you'll see that the texts you have added are to form much more coherent sentences and paragraphs. Not to criticize, but what you have added are bits and pieces of texts and sentences that need to be rearranged and put in the right places. Not to mention that you are missing signs like ", . and so forth. I'll advice you take a hard look at what you have added an compare it to how it appears in the game. 