Thread:InfiniteSaturn/@comment-34240967-20190713174457/@comment-39032055-20190714003104

I read the first chapter. There are some good ideas, and there are some parts that might need work. I’d like to politely remind you to double Check your grammar as well. But if you enjoy writing, then you’ll keep doing it, and if you keep it up, you can only improve! Thank you for sharing with me.