User blog comment:Blazing Flare/IT HAS BEGUN (Well almost...)/@comment-3964768-20150307233438

So...proper text spacing, Penders? Heard of it? 'Cause I can't tell which of these wobbly-lined monstorisites is speaking in what order.

That has to be a record. The first page, literally the FIRST FREAKING PAGE and he's screwed up. Better make those doubtless plot holes huge, Penders, or this trainwreck won't fit through 'em!