User blog comment:Ouroburos.TheNewSaurian/This is my Fan Character. What's Yours?/@comment-10603955-20111001204433

Your character has a terrible design, you could've done more. And also --- Don't do fancharacters make a real character please. Go watch a movie, read a book, watch TV too, and gather inspiration dude. Nobody gonna really like you if you keep puting your head in fanfiction. Do your own stories. Don't believe me? look up the auther of Game of Thrones (I'm refering to the books, not the TV show) if you have to. Trust me dude, you'll be more successful in your own content.