Thread:Bluestreak425/@comment-32769624-20190510143246/@comment-39325253-20190516140950

Well, so be it. Then I'll send it thing here, he will still see.

That analysis of possible mistakes I sent and lost yesterday, but today I had to type it again. True, a short version.

Last time I didn’t want to accept the changes that were here (this situation was more like most of the changes were taken from an old source and not heard personally).

But this time you turned out clearly better, but still there are mistakes (even some lines that were here before have recently become so when I realized my own mistakes).

I'm ready to point out all the weaknesses in the text (in my opinion) and briefly tell their essence.

Note:

(1), (2), (3), (n) – number of mistake, more details below;

(✓) – that line, with which I fully agree.

Also more below you can see my versions.

(✓)I can feel it now

(✓)Together movin' on

(1)We've got the strength we need

(2)And we're feeling strong!

(✓)We'll keep a heavy hand

(✓)We're gonna let it burn

(✓)Our eyes on the prize

(✓)As we're passing you!

(✓)When there's no better feeling

(3)Than to be here with you

(✓)With you!

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(✓)We won together

(✓)''On this Green Light Ride! (Blast off!)''

(✓)Drive through forever

(✓)On this Green Light Ride!

(4)Like the power we need

(✓)We're the fiery fleet

(✓)It's in our heart and soul

(5)And we stand for something!

(✓)To the end we go

(6)When we've had enough

(✓)Our inner strength will prove

(✓)You're not so tough!

(✓)When there's no chance we're losing

(✓)When I'm right here with you!

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(✓)We won together

(✓)''On this Green Light Ride! (Blast off!)''

(✓)Drive through forever

(✓)On this Green Light Ride!

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(7)(O-o-o-oh!) Keep a heavy hand!

(8)(O-o-o-oh!) Keep movin' on!

(✓)Green Light Ride

(9)We need a little more

(10)Up in the pushin' fight

(✓)Can you feel the fuel that we ignite!

(11)O-o-o-o-o-yeah!

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(12)O-o-o-o-o-yeah!

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(✓)I can feel it now

(✓)Together movin' on

(✓)We've got the strength we need

(13)And we're feeling strong!

(✓)There's no better feeling

(14)''Than to be here with... you!''

(✓)(Look out!)

(✓)(Blast off!)

(✓)We won together

(✓)''On this Green Light Ride! (Blast off)''

(✓)Drive through forever

(✓)On this Green Light Ride!

(✓)''We won... together''

(✓)On this Green Light Ride!

(✓)Green Light, go!

So, will start explanations.

(1); (2); (3). Everything was quite clearly pronounced and confirmed at a live concert last summer, where was performed a short version of song. "'ve," "the," "And," phrase "to be here": were exactly not spoken in the song. Instead of "the" it is clearly "a," instead of "Than" - "That's". It's all quite clearly audible. The only thing that is worst heard is that the word instead of a phrase. I have long been convinced and I still continue to be convinced that it there is said: "thinking."

(4); (5). Here simply added incorrect / extra words. Instead of "Like the" there should be a "Got a". "And" simply is not pronounced, rather just a small typo.

(6). "When" – by analogy with the past mistake: this word does not exist in song.

The word "enough" was not correctly heard by you, here instead of it is "undone."

(7); (8); (11); (12). Instead of "O" it is more correct to write "Whoa".

(9); (10). In the case of (9), of course, you can be understood yet; but (10) has absolutely nothing to do with the spoken words. That is why I considered it far-fetched.

With regards to (9). If apply additional ways and try to slow down the playback speed, you can safely hear "Your pedal on the metal – four." At a fast pace, this is difficult to hear, so no one has yet come to a more correct option.

In (10) as for me it is immediately heard "A led of pushin' – five." As soon recently as the full track appeared in good sound quality, I immediately heard this words from the first listening.

(13). It clearly said: "Every." And this certainly totally not a repetition of the text from the beginning of the song (as one might think).

(14). I have reason to believe that here happens is a similar situation as in the (13).

It is quite clearly heard that there is "That" and "you win." This line has no relation to the beginning of the song, although the construction of words would seem to be similar.

Here are my every specific suggestions for every correction:

(1)We got a strength we need

(2)You were feeling strong!

(3)That's a thinking with you

(4)Got a power we need

(5)We stand for something!

(6)We've had undone

(7)(Whoa-o-o-oh!) Keep a heavy hand!

(8)(Whoa-o-o-oh!) Keep movin' on!

(9)Your pedal on the metal – four

(10)A led of pushin' – five

(11)Whoa-o-o-o-o-yeah!

(12)Whoa-o-o-o-o-yeah!

(13)Every feeling strong!

(14)That to be you win... you!

I hope you will take note of my thoughts on this. Thanks.