Thread:True infinity35/@comment-5903643-20180215004532

First, there are obvious grammar errors ("you're", "preying", "axel" [supposed to be proper noun]). You should go fix those if you want to look professional.

Second, Fanfiction.net does not allow script fics, so you should move it to either DeviantArt or Wattpad.

Third, it's great so far! 