Thread:Bluestreak425/@comment-39325253-20190513111423

It is better to listen as it should, before you change something in text. I doubt you listened this for hours (like me). The first rule for us is not to far-fetched anything in your head, but to hear all the speech sounds in great accuracy and put them into words. And don't pay attention to what is written in other sources, first you need to make sure yourself.

I don't claim to be an expert, nevertheless don't see any compelling reasons in your editing. I know this song quite well already, and all you need to help the cause most of all: just hear very accurate the fourth line. Discuss the result with me, you are welcome. 