Thread:Ilovejamaa74/@comment-34240967-20180912185412

Hi there, I am working on the pure script version of memories of infinite's past. In the ending of chapter 8, I did mention that I have a friend, who is working on a business campaign proposal (I won't tell you what it is yet), for sega. And he said he will share the story to them, if/when his campaign goes viral and he gets the chance to have a meeting with them. If sega likes it, the story could become an ascended fanon (A Fanfic that becomes canonize to the main franchise). I will share parts of it, and there isn't many grammar errors in this version.

Memories of infinite’s past

SCENE 001 [EGGMAN EMPIRE FORTRESS, night]

[During the battle with the Eggman empire, Sonic, Rookie, and Infinite’s battle have finally reached to it’s conclusion. With the help of the Rookie, Sonic had finally defeated Infinite. While he was on the ground, Infinite was in a glitch-like state.]

Infinite: Impossible, I cannot be defeated.

Sonic: Wrong loser! The things that can’t be defeated are heart, soul, and the bonds of friendship. Three things you and your counterfeit cronies lack! [Infinite punches the ground, then suddenly he started to fade out. The phantom ruby was trying to erase him from existence, and he is trying to control it.]

Infinite: No, wait! I can still fight! [Infinite is struggling to keep the phantom ruby under control, so he flies away.]

Scene 002 [DR. EGGMAN’S LABORATORY.]

[While arriving in eggman’s laboratory, Infinite was trying to remove the phantom ruby from his body.]

Infinite: [Grunting] No… stop! I… can’t…. die!

[Infinite finally removes the phantom ruby, then he collapses on the floor. The phantom ruby shatters into pieces after Infinite’s fall. Now that the phantom ruby has been removed, Infinite’s body started to return to normal. He stands back up, removes his mask, then decided to sit and rest up against a phantom ruby lab capsule.]

Infinite: [panting] How? How could friendship make you stronger? [After questioning himself, Infinite passes out.]

FADE TO BLACK.

Scene 003 [DR. EGGMAN’S LABORATORY]

[The scene returns back to normal, showing Infinite still fast asleep. Then the scene cuts to Eggman, Orbot, and Cubot arriving at the lab. Eggman is furious about losing to Sonic again.]

Dr. Eggman: [Angry.] Darn it! I failed again! And I was so close to eradicating that blasted hedgehog and his friends once and for all! [As Dr. Eggman’s voice is heard, Infinite was starting to wake up.]

Cubot: Well boss, at least you were able to find a way out of null space.

Orbot: I told you, we should have eliminated sonic when he was unconscious, but you said. [Mimicking Eggman’s voice.] No! After all those years of humiliation I've endured, I want to make sonic suffer. Killing him now would be to easy.

Dr. Eggman: [Stops walking and growls at orbot.] SHUT UP! [Eggman slaps Orbot. Cubot laughs at Orbot for getting slapped, which results to him getting slapped as well.] THAT GOES FOR YOU TOO! [Eggman continues to walk up to the main computer of the laboratory.] Just when I thought I finally defeated sonic with the power of the phantom ruby, I ended up getting bested by him again! But rest assured, I will never give up, I will finally win, and this time I will destroy sonic without hesitation!

[Scene cuts to Infinite standing up, still holding his wounded chest. He stands behind the capsule and sees Eggman and the two robots up at the computer. Then he walks towards them. The camera cuts back to Eggman, Orbot, and Cubot.]

Orbot: Speaking of the phantom ruby, boss, what do you think happened to that infinite fellow?

Dr. Eggman: Oh him? He probably got erased by the phantom ruby.

Cubot: [Disappointed] Aw man! Just when I started to like him!

Orbot: [Disappointed] It truly is a shame.

Infinite: [Shouts] Hey!

[Eggman, Orbot, and Cubot turns around. The camera cuts to Infinite, Eggman and the two robots were surprised that infinite is still alive.]

Orbot: What!?

Cubot^: What!?

Dr. Eggman ^: What!? [All three said at the same time.]

Dr. Eggman: Infinite? How are you still alive?

Infinite: By pure luck. I was fast enough to flee from the battlefield to get back to the base. I had to remove the phantom ruby from my chest, because I was unable to control it’s power anymore.

Dr. Eggman: Oh… [Straighten up his glasses] well then, now that you’re still alive, [Turns his back on Infinite.] You may leave. Infinite: [Confused] What? Leave?

Dr. Eggman: You failed to destroy sonic, so I have no use for you anymore.

Infinite: No use? Who made you be the boss of me?

Dr. Eggman: [Turns around and points at Infinite] You did, my jackal friend! When you agreed to join me to conquer the world!

Infinite: [Angry] As a partnership! I never agreed to be your slave in order to help take over the world!

Dr. Eggman: [Laughs]

Dr. Eggman: You are such a fool! The last time I had partners, they ended up betraying me. I learned from those mistakes a long time ago.

Infinite: So what you’re saying…. is that you used me!?

Dr. Eggman: Bingo! You and your pathetic squad was no different from how I treat my robots! When I placed the phantom ruby prototype on your body, you’ve just been making my job easier to finish. How did you not figure that out before? I have no idea.

[Infinite was starting to lose his temper, when Eggman called his deceased squad, pathetic. He clinches his right fist, preparing to attack eggman.]

Infinite: Pathetic? You dare call my squad pathetic!?

Dr. Eggman: [Mocking Infinite] Why yes, yes I did.

Infinite: W-WHY YOU! [Infinite charges at Eggman. Eggman grins evilly, then presses a red button on his computer motherboard, which activates a robotic arm from the floor. The arm grabs Infinite before he could land a hit on Eggman.] WHAT!? [Infinite is trying to get free from the arm.] HEY, LET GO OF ME! [Orbot and cubot runs away from the situation.]

Dr. Eggman: MWAH-HA-HA-HA! Infinite, that was rather foolish of you to do that!

Infinite: LET ME GO, YOU FREAK!

Dr. Eggman: Freak? Hah! You’re one to talk! Now then, I tried to tell you to leave, but I guess I’ll have to escort you out myself. [Eggman pressed another button. Then a group of egg pawns came out of the laboratory floor, slowly approaching Infinite. Infinite is trying harder to get loose from the robotic arm, but his efforts are useless.] Now I believe it’s time we part our ways. [Eggman turns around and walks away] So long….. ZERO.

[Eggman laughs as he exits the plot. Cuts back to the robots closing in on the helpless Infinite. The scene fades into black.]

What do you think of it so far? 