User blog comment:Katrins/Emerald Snatcher Part 2/@comment-167456-20110227115319

Just a piece of constructive criticism: in panel three, it's not immediately clear what order we should read the talk balloon. We read from top to bottom and left to right, so that's how you should try to position the talk balloons too. Try moving Mikee's first balloon slightly higher than Sonic's.

Other than that it's coming along well.